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Just

Just give me the knife
and see where it goes from there.
Just give me the tears
and see how much i fear.

Just give me the satisfaction
of another worthless life gone.
Just take away my world
without one care.

These are the words you spoke,
with that pain in your voice.
These are the words you spoke
as u turned your face,
and walked away
from me.

Jan. 24/03
©2003-2010 ~-shanimal-
:icon-shanimal-:

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hmm....i really dont know. i just felt like writing something...

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:iconsunshinegurl:
well I like the poem because you just wanted to write something.
not all poems have to come from thoughts you have been having I found that out along time ago.
sometimes I dont even like poems that rhyme, you did a good job on that. Go You.
:iconblackbands:
The idea is really great, and it's written just as well :) (Smile)

good job on this, keep up the good work.

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~kiwi

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